Could use some work...
Just a few things:
1. From the beginning until 0:54 the bass is overpowering
2. From the beginning until 2:04 it's really repetitive.
I did like it when you changed it up a little at the end.
Could use some work...
Just a few things:
1. From the beginning until 0:54 the bass is overpowering
2. From the beginning until 2:04 it's really repetitive.
I did like it when you changed it up a little at the end.
Thanks for the tips! :D
Awesome!
I have never heard the normal version but this remix is great!
To me it sounded a tad distorted at times but that's only a minor detail.
Great job!
Well once you hear the original, you'll probably want to hit me with a baseball bat. And I'm going to change out the mp3 in a minute so you can hear the minimally distorted one.
Thanx for the helpful review!
DJ InTheDark
Beauiful
I really love the song.
The only thing that was bugging me was the quality of the piano.
Oh well...I give you a ten anyways.
Thanks, yea, im using the built in FL keys plugin with a bunch of effects added to try to boost the sound quality. There are a couple spots where it gets compressed :( but I spent forever adjusting the volume levels!
Thanks again for your review!
well...
It was surprisingly good however, I can tell that you didn't put very much effort into this. I thought that the beat was wonderful though!!!
haha oh man how could you tell :) Im just lazy lately I could be making bad ass stuff but i dunno..
Good but...
It was good but the melody was definitely lacking.
The bass was a little annoying to listen to as well.
Thanks for the tips. Just to let ya know this was actually my first song i ever made with this program, so it was kinda hard to figure everything out at first.
Excellent!
Great use of dynamics.
Great piece.
The strings went in nicely!
Thanks! Glad you like it.
I have a suggestion...
Don't use GARAGE BAND!!!
The "melody" (if that's what you would call it) was way off beat.
XP
When I made this I wasn't planning on uploading it to anything, it was purely class work. But when it was made I thought it was pretty good so I would see how it would survive out here.
Hysterical
The lyrics are very funny.
Nice
It sounded very arbitrary.
It kind of sounded like blues, but at the same time it didn't.
Good, however...
I know this is just a demo but if you are planning on making this into a full song (which I recommend) then you're going to have to add a lot more.
yea thanks, will keep it in mind.
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