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Hey It's me again

Hey great song this time.

Suggestions:

It's short and sweet. Perfect for a loop but I definitely think you could make this into a song.

What I think would make this really awesome would be if you were to get a better kick. I don't really know but the kick kinda has an ethnic (wrong word?) feel.

I really like the short intro with the gunshots, what sounds like a car speeding out of control, and the scratch.

What did you use for the strings?

Keep it going!

Meonly70 responds:

The strings were a preset in Nexus. If you have it and wanna know which, message me.

I was thinking EXACTLY the same about the kick after I made it, haha. :P I was too lazy to change it.

It took me a while to find the car sound, and to EQ it to fit. I'm not much of a rap person, or I would make a full song.

I agree

I think funkyguy had some good points he made, however, I definitely don't think this song deserves a four.

Pros and Cons:

1. The intro is like half the entire song. Sometimes you have a great intro and then (I'm not saying this was the case) you just can't really think of some good variations of it.

2. After listening to the long intro I begin to hear what I think is a great melody with great potential. Unfortunately it continues to repeat throughout the entire piece.

3. The melody is very catchy!

4. The transitions were moderately smooth.

5. I do have to agree with funkyguy when he mentioned the little quote you used right before switching to the melody. I do believe it would have been better left out. In my experience when I hear that there is usually some dramatic change in the piece. You could have tried side chaining or enhancing the kick.

Overall:

A good song. I has potential with things needed changing here and there.

Keep going!!!

Meonly70 responds:

Hey man, first off thanks for the review.

When i wrote this song, i was realllyyyyyy having quite a lot of trouble with the structures of my songs. I had writers block, even now.

I just dont have the inspiration as i did a year ago. Most of my tracks are repetitive, and dont have too many variations, and I just cant seem to think of many of them...

I have only a few songs with catchy intros, and smooth transitions.

The only thing I am good at, is melodies, when other people are having trouble with that rather than their structure, like I am. Its a weird problem with me, but I cant do anything about it.

I'll try to expand my style and add more things. I am guessing it just takes a lot more work and effort.

Cool

Nice and crazy...I like it.

Great!

Excellent Drum and Bass. I like the ambient feel.

Jenni-Harry4eva3 responds:

Thanks!

Interesting

How would I describe this?

Hmm...

I'd rather not listen to the same thing for 2 minutes.

Good

It's funny how the title seems to be a good title for the song even though it has a rhythm. Honestly I have no idea what the guy below me was trying to say.

DraconityMusic responds:

Me neither. Thanks for the good review, and for making sense! Be sure to check out our other stuff as well!

Awesome!!!

Dude sick beat!
The only thing I would fix is that the kick distorts at certain points.

Keep it up!

diplomatikProduktion responds:

iight thanks dude... what do you mean by distorts

Weird.

That's a pretty weird song you've made but that doesn't make it bad.

The vocals were kinda blurry though...

Blasphem-E responds:

well, for this style of tracvk, thought I'd try a slight blur. O well. thanks for the review!

...

wtf?

XxBelialXx responds:

well.....what!

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