Beauiful
I really love the song.
The only thing that was bugging me was the quality of the piano.
Oh well...I give you a ten anyways.
Beauiful
I really love the song.
The only thing that was bugging me was the quality of the piano.
Oh well...I give you a ten anyways.
Thanks, yea, im using the built in FL keys plugin with a bunch of effects added to try to boost the sound quality. There are a couple spots where it gets compressed :( but I spent forever adjusting the volume levels!
Thanks again for your review!
well...
It was surprisingly good however, I can tell that you didn't put very much effort into this. I thought that the beat was wonderful though!!!
haha oh man how could you tell :) Im just lazy lately I could be making bad ass stuff but i dunno..
Good but...
It was good but the melody was definitely lacking.
The bass was a little annoying to listen to as well.
Thanks for the tips. Just to let ya know this was actually my first song i ever made with this program, so it was kinda hard to figure everything out at first.
Excellent!
Great use of dynamics.
Great piece.
The strings went in nicely!
Thanks! Glad you like it.
I have a suggestion...
Don't use GARAGE BAND!!!
The "melody" (if that's what you would call it) was way off beat.
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When I made this I wasn't planning on uploading it to anything, it was purely class work. But when it was made I thought it was pretty good so I would see how it would survive out here.
Good, however...
I know this is just a demo but if you are planning on making this into a full song (which I recommend) then you're going to have to add a lot more.
yea thanks, will keep it in mind.
ok...
Overall piece = Good
Piano = Bad (Sounds terribly out of tune...at least you added reverb)
Overall everything else = Ok
Thank you for the comments, although I was hoping for a little more detail on the songs good/bad points. But I am still glad that you liked the piece overall, and I can definitely re-work that piano by taking it back into the midi suite and changing the voice.
Don't make it into a song
I agree with Onizero.
Even if you were to make this into a full song I doubt that it would get any farther than this.
on the contrary I've dragged out hardcore songs as far as I possibly can, and they turn out good. Check out Post-Hardcore song 2 final.
Good
Very...uh...sporadic.
yes!
Interesting
I think adding lyrics would just ruin this because it is a DnB song.
Also, the beat kind of ruined it for me.
There should be less scattered kick drum and more hihats if you want this to be a good DnB song.
I thought that the bass was wonderful though!!!
We all have our preferences, for me it's not about making a technical DNB song, but more a song with DnB elements. I have to protest what you say about lyrics as well, as there are bands such as Pendulum and Cell Dweller who, albeit their diverse and distinct musical style, fall under the genre of DnB.
Like I always say as well: Review a song based on its sound, not its genre.
Thanks for the review though and insight.
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