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The piano composition is beautiful and the beat is sick. I'm definitely gonna favorite this one. The transition you made around 2:35 was not that great in my opinion though, and the I don't think the vocals helped much either.
I loved the intro though, and the ending was beautiful with the piano.
I think this deserves more like a 9.5 but newgrounds will not let you do that :(
thanks a lot dude.
Wow Great
Hey this is so much better than the original.
You finally added some variety!
It's not just the same melody repeating over and over again.
Well...actually it is but all of the small changes you made throughout the song make up for it.
I don't really know if the synth you added around 2:00 was good or bad. I'll let you decide.
One thing I forgot to mention in my last review was that the bass was great as well.
Maybe you could give me advice on one of my songs sometime?
Hey, glad you liked this one more! The changes were actually made by my friend DJ Derrick. You should check his page out, he has some good music, he scored top 30 this week too.
The synth gives it a more techno-ish feel. The guy makes the best synths I have heard. It was an example for me, showing me what I should add to my songs to make them sound better, and obviously, i should because a majority like this one more.
Just those small changes make a big difference.
Hey It's me again
Hey great song this time.
Suggestions:
It's short and sweet. Perfect for a loop but I definitely think you could make this into a song.
What I think would make this really awesome would be if you were to get a better kick. I don't really know but the kick kinda has an ethnic (wrong word?) feel.
I really like the short intro with the gunshots, what sounds like a car speeding out of control, and the scratch.
What did you use for the strings?
Keep it going!
The strings were a preset in Nexus. If you have it and wanna know which, message me.
I was thinking EXACTLY the same about the kick after I made it, haha. :P I was too lazy to change it.
It took me a while to find the car sound, and to EQ it to fit. I'm not much of a rap person, or I would make a full song.
I agree
I think funkyguy had some good points he made, however, I definitely don't think this song deserves a four.
Pros and Cons:
1. The intro is like half the entire song. Sometimes you have a great intro and then (I'm not saying this was the case) you just can't really think of some good variations of it.
2. After listening to the long intro I begin to hear what I think is a great melody with great potential. Unfortunately it continues to repeat throughout the entire piece.
3. The melody is very catchy!
4. The transitions were moderately smooth.
5. I do have to agree with funkyguy when he mentioned the little quote you used right before switching to the melody. I do believe it would have been better left out. In my experience when I hear that there is usually some dramatic change in the piece. You could have tried side chaining or enhancing the kick.
Overall:
A good song. I has potential with things needed changing here and there.
Keep going!!!
Hey man, first off thanks for the review.
When i wrote this song, i was realllyyyyyy having quite a lot of trouble with the structures of my songs. I had writers block, even now.
I just dont have the inspiration as i did a year ago. Most of my tracks are repetitive, and dont have too many variations, and I just cant seem to think of many of them...
I have only a few songs with catchy intros, and smooth transitions.
The only thing I am good at, is melodies, when other people are having trouble with that rather than their structure, like I am. Its a weird problem with me, but I cant do anything about it.
I'll try to expand my style and add more things. I am guessing it just takes a lot more work and effort.
Great!
Excellent Drum and Bass. I like the ambient feel.
Thanks!
Good
It's funny how the title seems to be a good title for the song even though it has a rhythm. Honestly I have no idea what the guy below me was trying to say.
Me neither. Thanks for the good review, and for making sense! Be sure to check out our other stuff as well!
Awesome!!!
Dude sick beat!
The only thing I would fix is that the kick distorts at certain points.
Keep it up!
iight thanks dude... what do you mean by distorts
Weird.
That's a pretty weird song you've made but that doesn't make it bad.
The vocals were kinda blurry though...
well, for this style of tracvk, thought I'd try a slight blur. O well. thanks for the review!
Could use some work...
Just a few things:
1. From the beginning until 0:54 the bass is overpowering
2. From the beginning until 2:04 it's really repetitive.
I did like it when you changed it up a little at the end.
Thanks for the tips! :D
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