haha
this is a strange one. Sounds like one of the songs I made when I was starting out (except this is better). The only thing I can find to say constructively is that it is a little too distorted which, I think, ruins the overall feel. Also as the guy said below me it is a little repetitive. Maybe check out my stuff :) keep going
Thanks for the review as well. :D
Yes, the synths got messed up for some reason when I converted the file type. They were quite clear when I made it.
I consider myself just starting, I've only really started to understand Ableton within the past 3 months.
Very nice
I really like the track.
The Intro in the beginning was a little unappealing.
When you first brought in the drums in the beginning I was thinking they could have been better but then I realized that they fit in perfectly at the climax.
Also the chiptune thing got fairly annoying after listening to it for the whole song but I guess it fits in with the whole "cyber" theme to this song.
Overall good track
Good
This is definitely good even though you just took samples from some movie.
Again you this has the same problem as the other song of yours that I reviewed:
The drums overpower everything. You probably meant for that to happen but at the quieter parts they are too much compared to the other instruments.
Good job. Better that your other one
its hip hop, the drums are supposed to be loud, !
Almost Perfect
I love the variety you used!
It isn't just the same thing over and over again.
I think in the middle when things kinda settle down, the drums should have not been so loud compared to the strings.
I also think you picked a great clap but a not-so-great kick.
Everything works out anyways so good job!
Thanks for the criticism. I just kinda see it the other way round. I like the kick but i hate the clap. ;)
its good
Very unoriginal yet somehow the instruments made is sound more high quality.
It's the same chord progression throughout the ENTIRE song (really annoying)
Also you use that same snare used in every hip hop song known to man
The one thing that made this stand out were the instruments. Not the misplaced distorted synth, but the strings. They were excelent!
most god dma songs in the world are same chord progression. dam!
Awesome
Talk about awesome glitch!
One of the many tools on my tool belt.
Awesome
This is Awesome the audio is great.
I thought the drums that came in around 1:00 made it kinda messy though.
Can't find anything else wrong with it though! 10/10 5/5
Thank you!
Haha great!
I'm not sure this belongs under Ambient but I wouldn't know where else to put it. This is great! Many different ideas at once. I thought you did a good job with the drums and your choice of synths as well.
Thank you very much for you review. . Though, I see you gave me a 9, what could be changed/improved? :]
Excellent
I can usually come up with some constructive criticism but in this case I cannot. I really like this one because it is unlike anything I've heard before. The only thing I can say to make it better is maybe change up the melody, however, all of the little changes you add throughout the song makes up for it. Excellent.
Minimallism looooooooool. xD
Good but...
I liked it very much, however, it was your choice of sounds that I did not like. For some reason the bass really bothered me. It just really didn't fit the song at all. I loved the intro especially because of all of the great transitions. I get the feeling that you put all this effort into the intro and then once you finally got to the melody you had this "Lets get it over with" feeling. When the main melody comes in it's only the melody on top of a really distracting bass. I would suggest adding something in the middle. I did like it, however, when you added the piano.
Good job!
I might have to lower the volume on the bass I guess. It was meant to be a Hardstyle song so thats why it sounds the way it does, bass and synth.
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