FlightPattern's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Aquatic]]

Good, however...

I know this is just a demo but if you are planning on making this into a full song (which I recommend) then you're going to have to add a lot more.

KrawniK responds:

yea thanks, will keep it in mind.

[29 Days]

ok...

Overall piece = Good

Piano = Bad (Sounds terribly out of tune...at least you added reverb)

Overall everything else = Ok

bjamr67 responds:

Thank you for the comments, although I was hoping for a little more detail on the songs good/bad points. But I am still glad that you liked the piece overall, and I can definitely re-work that piano by taking it back into the midi suite and changing the voice.

[The Beginnings of a Death]

Don't make it into a song

I agree with Onizero.

Even if you were to make this into a full song I doubt that it would get any farther than this.

Freefaller responds:

on the contrary I've dragged out hardcore songs as far as I possibly can, and they turn out good. Check out Post-Hardcore song 2 final.

[Sprawl]

Good

Very...uh...sporadic.

PenguinBomb responds:

yes!

[More Machine than Man]

Interesting

I think adding lyrics would just ruin this because it is a DnB song.

Also, the beat kind of ruined it for me.

There should be less scattered kick drum and more hihats if you want this to be a good DnB song.

I thought that the bass was wonderful though!!!

LightKeeper responds:

We all have our preferences, for me it's not about making a technical DNB song, but more a song with DnB elements. I have to protest what you say about lyrics as well, as there are bands such as Pendulum and Cell Dweller who, albeit their diverse and distinct musical style, fall under the genre of DnB.

Like I always say as well: Review a song based on its sound, not its genre.

Thanks for the review though and insight.

[Mario's Elevator]

Really Good!!!

I think that this is a jazz piece even though it's a remake of a video game song.

I really like the song overall!!!

:D

[-*Memories From The Stars*-]

good job

Everything was great except the metallic sound to the beat really bugged me.

I did love the piano though!!!! :D

DjRocALot responds:

Cool ::D

Roc A Lot

[Internal Orchestra]

um...

turn up the orchestral instruments and add reverb.

[Kingdom Hearts-Dearly Beloved]

Great!

Everything sounded fine except when I got to 1:22 it seemed off pitch.

[Yesterday (ftr Kyle Blackwood)]

Great!

Everything was perfect except the vocals were a little too quiet.