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Pretty sweet

Sounds like the 80's!
The only criticism I have is the annoying open hi hat. Thankfully it's pretty quiet.
This is great keep up the good work!!

ChronoNomad responds:

The 80s? I love the 80s! I will totally take that as an amazing compliment. :)

I tried to keep the percussion levels softer in general, but that hat is still kind of overpowering. Believe me, I'd adjust it if I could, but even after mastering it still sounds "a little too treble".

All were great

The one at 0:22 was ma fav

The on at 0:44 and 1:28 were s3xy also

Pure awesomness

Shaggy you have worked your magic once again. Keep up the good work. Maybe you should begin to work away from newgrounds. Your stuff is so good I'm surprised you still post stuff on this site instead of trying to sell it :)

Awesome

Idk if you stole this but it's really good.

Pretty good

This song caught me at a time when I was pissed off from all the SHIT people waste their time making and submitting to this website. One of the reasons I consider it shit is because most of it is the same thing for six minutes. I'm glad can finally take a break from all this "shit" now that I have finally found this song. The only thing I can say is add a tiny bit more variety. The whole song revolves around four notes going down and then starting over. The rest of it is good though. Keep going!

Holiday spirit!

Way to keep up with the holidays!
Just a few things.
It's really boring until around 2:18. It's the same thing over and over again. I'm pretty sure carol of the bells is not this repetitive.
Also boost the kick and add a snare.
I do REALLY like it at 2:18 when you switch it up.
This has great potential keep going!

ZachPayne responds:

Thank you! I'll keep experimenting with it!

Pretty nice

I really like how you switched keys at 1:10. I don't like how long it is because it's too much of the same thing for too long. I know you liked the kick but I didn't like how it distorted the rest of the song. Also work on making your own synths instead of using presets. I could have really enjoyed all the different parts to this if I didn't feel like I had to jump around in order to get through it. It leaves room for improvement but it has potential.

Darkfire96 responds:

Unfortunately my synth making skills are underdeveloped so ill see what i can do. I Really didn't EQ the song as i was rushing the entire thing on to Newgrounds. Ill fix that ASAP! Im sorry about the length but i had gotten carried away with the last part. Ill see to it that it is shortened. But im leaving this song up just in case someone has a different view on this song.
Thanks For The Review!

/-DJ Chaos-\

Awesome

I can't wait for you to add lyrics and yes I definitely have those moments where you randomly name your songs based on what you think sounds good. The only thing I can criticize is that panning effect you have on that keyboard instrument. It kinda gets on my nerves. This is very good overall!

lilmcj22 responds:

Yeaa I wish I could've changed that! But thanks! Somehow, every time I think a beat is doing good, and the score is high, it suddenly drops. Wth is up with that? And I can't wait to put some lyrics on this..

Awesome

I love this it's awesome. The only thing I can complain about is how you started out at the very start with the same melody used in almost every dance song on newgrounds. The main melody is done perfectly though so good job on that. Also you kept it short and straight to the point which is another good thing. Keep making music :)

Nice

Im liking this. Maybe boost the kick and snare. Also when you brought in that weird bass at the beginning of the song I was going"Wow this is really cool!" but then it got really quiet. That was probably the coolest thing in this song so don't put it somewhere far off in the background. Awesome job :)

JkidProductions responds:

Haha yeah, i changed up my drums now, i layer em in patterns so its nice and loud and i changed the bass thing, i made it a lot louder, ill be changing lots of my songs in a little so make sure you see. :D

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